2012년 5월 16일 수요일

jihye Kim

Effects of listening too much music through earphone



These days, many people listen music through earphone.You will lose your hearing, if you keep listening it through earphone. Also, You can't hear well, when someone want to talk with you. I often heard bad news. Someone who was listening music through it had an accident on someones's way, beacause the person couldn't hear honk. We must not use earphone to listen music if possible to protect our hearing or body .

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  1. Yes, people should be careful, I agree. Just tonight I saw a TV show where a woman was walking with earphones and did not know that a man was following her with a gun. Luckily, another man saved her. She didn't even know it because she was listening to music loudly.

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    Listening to music with earphones has both physical and social consequences.

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